Feedback II

Feedback from a non programmer and my responses:

"I also like the b&w better.

One question: why do you say the loop finishes? In my point of view (a non-programmer one, I admit), he has not got his keys and therefore he should keep looking for them. I mean, what is the "while loop" here? while he does not have the keys, he looks for them? He has not got the keys at the end, so he should continue to look for them, chasing the guy in the car. If the loop is while not knowing where the keys are, then it would be different, but I think the loop is about not having them, since he was going to go out and he needed them. It would be different if he were going to bed and then noticed the keys weren't there."

I made the end to hopefully give it a bit of humour and a more interesting one than him just finding the keys. So I see what your saying in the fact that he doesn't actually have the keys himself but he knows where they are, so you aren't going to keep on looking for them as you know you aren't going to find them.

"As I understood it, the process would be like this:

Getting ready
IF clothes not on THEN put on
IF shoes not laced THEN lace up
IF (etc)

Getting the keys
IF keys not in place THEN look for them
WHILE keys not found = [what? Look everywhere? Look in house? Check not left somewhere else?...]

Going out"

The getting ready isn't really part of the loop, it's there to show the viewer that he's getting ready to go out and to set the scene but I see what you are getting at, but it does seem like you are kind of understanding what a while loop is which is a success as this is the whole point of the film.