Here is another attempt at using the 'Times' video technique of multiple frames. This time I tried to lose the negative space because before there was so much of it that it over powered the visuals and emphasis on the story was lost. I think that it looks much sleeker but it's very difficult to do and time the clips together.

Also it isn't quite how a computer works, a computer doesn't do the same thing at multiple times which I find that this video is suggesting. So although it looks much more interesting and is quite different I don't think that it works in this scenario unfortunately.